Tuesday, August 28, 2007

Panraven - Edit Story

Panraven - Edit Story


Well, this is what I came up with for a story. I had 70 pictures to start off with. You can check some of them out at my panraven sight. There was so much to share, but I wanted to also make it a fun book for a young audience as well. Please let me know if you have an suggestions or feed back. Skip, how do I turn this in? Thanks.

Just in case your not sure, you just have to hit the blue title above to get to the story.

2 comments:

skipvia said...

I'm getting an error message when I try to access your story using the link in your blog. Make sure that you view your story in Panraven, copy that link, and broadcast that out to people so that they can access your story. This is the actual link to your story:

http://www.panraven.com/mylife/ViewStory.epage?sp=102648

I found it by searching through the Public Stories on Panraven.

By the way--FANTASTIC story! Great pictures, excellent text, nice layout. This is everything that this assignment should be. One word of caution--you used "your" a few times in your story when you should have used "you're." You can pretty easily edit that.

Margaret Avugiak said...

Hi Noel,
I couldn't access the panraven story, I guess if I search under public stories I might find it. I had to add everyone's e-mail address after clicking view and share and then got a little green astrick which indicated to which people it got sent to. Just add the e-mail address's to your "share" box and you'll send it to whomever you want it sent too. Happy September.